Tää ei varmaan laske kritiikiks, mut niitten molempien korvat näyttää mikrosulatetulta juustolta. o,,o

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mä en tiiä mitä juustoo sä oot ostanu mut~ :'D

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I love their expressions, especially the girl on the right's! Even though they have such a strong family resemblance, their different attitudes make them really stand out from one another as different people. Also, I like the colour scheme you used a lot. The use of values of blue and orange particularly make a subtle but eye-catching contrast, while still tying together the colours throughout the piece.

What I'd point out is that the hair and skin look a little flat; the use of more shadows that go through the main body of the hair to show more clearly the light source, and shadows and highlights on the skin to give things like the nose and cheeks more volume and the eyes a little more depth, could help. ^^

Overall though, it's a great illustration that shows a lot about the different personalities of the sisters. They seem like really interesting characters! Are they fighters or warriors, perhaps, judging by their outfits?

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Democracy is a device that ensures we shall be governed no better than we deserve.
George Bernard Shaw

Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than holding hands?
Ernest Gaines

lol i feel ashamed when you waste this much time writing a comment :'D thanks again lol
they'r officers from this series i'we been designing : /
the mellowfellow is in the command unit and uses a sword (came up with her days ago) and the mean looking one is the ''crazy'' sister, just beating the shit out of people and uses a huge sniper (there's a full body image of her i made previously, earlyer in my gallery)
but yeah i really dont know what to reply again : d thanks for the critique and tips i'll work on them.

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the future isn't what it used to be [link]
dont klick the link

The time's not wasted at all!

They sound like super-cool characters! Are you going to post the series online when it's done? ^w^

Sorry if I sounded nitpicky. D: It's just a fault of mine. But thank you for thanking! >w> It's nice when people take critique well~

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Democracy is a device that ensures we shall be governed no better than we deserve.
George Bernard Shaw

Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than holding hands?
Ernest Gaines

well i requested it :3
i think i never will be done x'D got too much work
i will tho if i get a comic of it one day~ it's not like i'll just write it somewhere D|

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the future isn't what it used to be [link]
dont klick the link

Nimiä on vaikea keksii. Ite länttään hahmoille aina jonkun random japanilaisnimen tai -sanan.

Kuulostaa muuten hyvältä noi persoonat mitä luin noita aiempia kommentteja.

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miksi luulet että kysyin suomeksi
tahtos jotain tosi kotosta ja järeetä, ehkä jonku ei niin kliseen linnun nimi tyyliin
varis = klisee
tiira = ei klisee mut tyhmä
siis jotain tämmöst harvinaisempaa ja niide pitäs olla hyvii nimii ku nää on tavallaa mun elämäntyön päähenkilöt : /
pitäs kirjottaa jossai vaihees paprulle mutku tarina muuttuu koko ajan

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the future isn't what it used to be [link]
dont klick the link

No ei ainakaa suomesta mitään löydy..

Kannattas käydä kattoo nimisivuilla netissä.
Tää sivu jolta mie yleensä käyn japsinimiä on hyvä, koska siinä on joillekkin nimille selitykset mitä ne tarkottaa. >>[link]

Tai sitte ota joku "järee" sana ja vaiha siitä alkukirjain tai lisää loppuun.

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